Tuesday, May 1, 2007

I-Search Essay "Could I be a Firefigher"

-I thought the author gave a good description of her thoughts and feelings
-I never got bored reading it so I guess that means I liked it.
-She just went right into the paper there wasn't much of an Introduction.
-Her concrete details were great I liked her descriptions of everything. I really got an idea of what she was seeing.

1 comment:

Annette said...

Good thoughts. You're right; there wasn't much of an introduction. I want your papers to be different. You'll see an example of an extensive introduction in class this week.